My affections repose
on silken strings,
weaved by passions
magical embrace.
For you, my delight,
have captured my love,
as a still life snapshot,
ever imprinted in the
citadel of your heart.
Fragile as morning lillies
exuding the fragrance
of true romance.
Framed like a masterpiece
of infinite glory,
shared by twin hearts
of devotion.
Author notes
Option #2
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b185/specialStar/brokenheartxx.jpg
A contest entry
- Peace filled Poetry in motion ~ Picture Prompted Contest by Stardust-luvr.
2250 points, ended September 6, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like how you turned the broken heart image into a write of true and aspiring lasting love. Written with evident hope and peace within the spirit that shines deeply within like a dewy reflection beneath a rising sun. thank you for entering and many blessings always
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Lovely write full of deep affection.
Nevadapoet -
Wow, Darell, this piece is gorgeous. It's a true reminder of what I am looking for in life, and I cannot begin to explain here the joy that it gives me that you have captured it so entirely well. I adore the idea of the concept being captured in a snapshot; it makes me literally think both of a snapshot and the reality that the feeling is unforgettable. You also caught my attention with lilies, since they are my absolutely favorite flower and carry a beautifully strong fragrance, strong and revealed truthfully like love should be. And finally I think the last stanza is beautiful and ties the whole concept of love together: that it should be shared equally between two people. Thank you for such a beautiful reminder and inspiration.
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pretty
I loved your final verse, it was the best out of all of them! If you want an advice, i would only say that the line number 7 doesn't quite roll off of your tounge as well as the other lines do
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A beauty you penned!
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I thought you were talking about your love for a woman,
great job writing this poem, it is so much nicer than the photo.
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enchanting
i love the imagery
i was standing in the rain a few days ago
just admiring, feeling, touching the sky
sort of not like gene kelly
but
being inspired by, feeling a deep love of nature,
all that has been created in a beautiful, practical, way
how each part of the world, people, too
supplement fulfill each other's needs
the clouds, sky, air, earth, wind
all playing a part to fulfill the storm
i got that sense from your work
time, love standing still to create a beautiful picture
superb
and smart, too
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A beautiful poem, well written and very easy to read.
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this is a beautiful poem- I loved the sense of forever you instilled
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beautiful and sensual good luck
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Beautiful write...that is true love. I wish I had that kind of love given to me...instead of me just giving it...
I loved your language and the structure worked well!
"Framed like a masterpiece
of infinite glory,
shared by twin hearts
of devotion."
That's what love should be...both sides...meaning it. Love this write...good luck in the contest my friend...
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