Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

www.myspace.com/ilidzs

www.myspace.com/ilidzs

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Solidified
    August 15, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    ooops

  • Solidified
    August 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    the plead for help really brings this from a "scary crazy" rant into a piece which a reader can connect to.

    At first it appears you are angry and want to hurt another person, but after reading it thoroughly it looks like you're hurting yourself.


    Either way it's very strong and incites a lot of feelings for the reader.


    • Ilidzs
      August 15, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      The wierd thing is...

      I love life and would never think of this stuff myself, it is like something gets in my brain at night when I am sleeping and stores this shit in my brain and I write it all down the next day. I seriously scare the hell out of my wife with this stuff.