As I lay here at the Mountains feet
I listen to the wind whispers sweet
Singing me a warm lullaby
My humble heart heaves a sigh
So soft and beautiful is the night
The moon and stars giving light
Clouds so soft float in the sky
I smile at them as they pass by
The whispering wind says welcome friend
Enjoy this land which has no end
Listen to the babbling brook
Rest in comfort in this tiny nook
Breakfast on wild berries and much more
Fresh water from the brook and not a store
Oats to grind for flour to bake some bread
With the other foods, makes a fine spread
Enjoy the banquet given by Mother Earth
Her genorisity fills one with mirth
She gives of her yield so very free
We are her children friend, you and me
A contest entry
- SPEAK TO ME FROM A NATIVE VOICE by Whispering Wind.
875 points, ended August 27, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
Comments
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Reads like a softly spoken breeze, calm and warming , good lluck with this wonderful write
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Thank you for reading and for commenting on my poem. So glad you enjoyed it...Katie
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Beautiful. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val
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Thank you Elfin...Katie
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BREATH TAKING
your words flow magic and i found myself holding my breath with awe...you have painted the perfect picture on your canvas of words...A true honor to read
Niaish so much for sharing such beauty and for entering
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Simply Beautiful
images have flowed from your quill. Mother Nature does so freely give of what we all need for life. Your offering paints pleasing images upon the pallate of my conciousness.
Best of Luck in the Contest
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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Thank you Silent Hawk for your kind comment on my poem.. Katie
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You have such a beautiful way with words.Good luck with this.
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Thank you daviscth. Your comment is appreciated...Katie
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What beauty you have written
The pleasure to read this was so much joy thanks again...mac
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Hi Mac.... nice to hear from you. thank you for your comment on my poem. Glad you enjoyed. How is everything going for you.. Are you ready to go dancing yet?.
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