You can make me live,
Or I die by your sword.
You waken all my sences
And deny a longset sadness.
I live for myself
By living in your grace.
You puncture all my weakness
And keep me strong for you.
The light that you bring to me
Fulfills my inner peace.
It quells my fears
And consols my heart.
I know I'll live in your trust.
The days that you leave,
A part of me goes missing.
The light fades away
And I stumble in the dark.
There's no use in living
WIthout you by my side.
My only dream is to live for you
And know your loving embrace.
I long for the days
When you'll hold me in your arms.
I pine for the time
I'll feel your gaze again.
I know we'll overcome the space
That's tearing us apart.
You keep the best of me alive
Even through your darkest light.
You're all I ever wished for,
You're not the monster in your eyes.
You're everything I'll ever need
And I've surrendered to your whims.
Author notes
At first it sounds like it's about God, but it's actually not. It's about the person I truly love.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow
Very passionate. good Job Best of luck -
This is lovely, maybe it's just me, but I didn't realy think it was about god in the beginning. I really enjoy the absolute love of this poem, the commitment. an excellent write! Thanks for sharing this, and all the best in the contest,
Luck.
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