The way leads on…..
the path…….
dark and swollen
the rock absorbing solitude
the wind echoing lullaby’s warble
and sometimes…
peeping from a sidewalk fence
a rose with moon inside
reflecting a sparkling eye
pink—the color of desire which the rainbow failed to own
the flame of the forest with
a shadowy smile
bending to touch the unuttered word
the falling leaves
wayward
darkening gloom and unattended screams
accompanying the gasping breath
the creeping numbness of a distanced affection
the truth unknown
on the wailing path
the affected cloud
staring at the detached sky
the bush thick and close
like the lovers’ grip
the orange glow seemingly indifferent
with hidden palpable hearts
the mind carrying half-forgotten
disturbing melodies
and sometimes…
the anklet of singing streams
squeezing a seductive smile
gliding on fantasy
to float on lighter moments
the heat of blending symphonies
melting bodies and souls in unison
exciting pleasantries
buried angst springing from
suppressed whimper…
and the world
hanging upside down…
the way leads on….
Author notes
title.c.meaningless darkness
contest masaic--no.6 life as mosaic
A contest entry
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NICE imaginary you have put here!
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I like your use of imagery and how the first line leads the reader in to a story, and it ends where it started, with "the way leads on" good job!
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i liked this. good luck
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"pink—the color of desire which the rainbow failed to own" i love this line
great job and good luck in the contest
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this was beautiful
i like it
goodluck in the contest ! -
Beautifully written.
there is sadness
there is romance
there is love...
all the way leads on
to some memories.
Summer
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