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Raining Tears

do you know
how much I LOVE this rain

do you know why???
because within this rain
I cry a millions tears
until my eyes are tired

I love it when
my tears unite with rain drops
and so even when you see me
you never know I am crying

after hours of tears and pain
when I turn blue with grief
its so good to know
that you think its just the cold

and when I get sick
because within me I broke loose
it makes me feel happy
that you think it was the rain

Do you know
How much i WANT this rain

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 16, 2008

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    This is a great take on the prompt. thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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