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Drowning






Pools of gray glass
envelope porcelain skin
like quilts to warm
the sting of Death as
it charges onward now.

Darkness cornering the open
mind, awaiting like doves
anticipate cold winters to
make their move to warmer lands.

Warm seas of unforgotten sorrows
wash over my feeble body with
passion as in a lover's arms...

Sleep comes tranquilly
accompanied with finality.








 

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  • redhanded
    August 15, 2008

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    This is a great write---I liked the over all flow of the piece and I expecially like the ending "sleep comes tranquilly, accompanied with finality " love it keep up the good work best of luck to in the future and with your writing...
    andi
    (redhanded)