Hands held transfer visions
of sunsets on choppy seas in
Ireland; like glowing orbs
viewed brighter on cratered
moons in space.
Kisses placed on lips like
French music playing in Paris
while standing neath the Eiffel Tower;
triste never farther like
ancient ruins to distant pasts
that I can smile on presently.
Eyes of bright teal like every
sky I could imagine; changing
hues in foreign lands and salt
air that I can scarcely taste...
Feathered visions placed like
warm embraces and I'll never
pine for anything more than
what you place
within my soul
Author notes
1, I want your depiction of a song of your choice. But make sure you put the title and artist in your author's notes.
Song: People As Places As People
Artist: Modest Mouse
Line from song:
"'Cause you're all the places that I wanted to go
Yeah, you're the places that I wanted to go"
Photo cred: embrace by ~uncommonbeauty
In a list
A contest entry
- Options. by MelissahhMidnite.
1364 points, ended September 30, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love - Who can show me what they've got?? by starblaze.
600 points, ended August 21, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love him ♥
Comments
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Thank you for entering the contest. Some nice images well put together. I like the way it fits the prompt of your first competition, its a nice way to describe how someone you love can affect you. Thanks again
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great write
good luck in the contest
MelissahhMidnit -
I love the picture, very cool. And I love all of the metaphors you utilize so beautifully. Good job an good luck.
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