Having drinks at the Ritz
Two cats in a battle of wits,
Shredding each other to bits,
Both putting on the glitz
Elegant black and white affair
with an occasional pouting glare,
This can only end in despair
neither one has a prayer...
On lookers think they're having fun
little do they know, fight has just begun,
Ladies knew the harm was done
Friendly words are said with puns
Mutually liked a guy name Steve
One thought the other was deceive
His intention were misconceive,
brawl broke out...both asked to leave
Author notes
Option 8
Credit PHOTOBUCKET
A contest entry
- Cocktails for Two by cricketjeff.
850 points, ended December 7, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Laugh by Pollycheck.
575 points, ended January 3, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest. There is nothing like a good cat fight to put a smile on a guys face.
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A pre-write snuck in before I finished getting the contest up
But a delicious monorhyme needs serious attention and I have enjoyed this a lot.
Thanks for the entry.
Jeff
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What a mature way of fighting!
I love your take on the prompt! 
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This is a great write, it put a smile on my face, very funny at points
It is written really well, and has a great flow to it. I love it!
Thanks so much for entering
Katie
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Hehe this was a very great write.. I enjoyed the humour in this; very comical in certain aspects.
Good flow and rhyme to this as well.
Thanks so much for sharing & best of luck -
this just made my day. This is really good. Count me your newest fan.
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LOL!!! What a wonderful approach to this picture prompt!!! You brought the picture to life. I could see the whole scene. Good job with this and good luck...
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