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Meyou Cat

what do I do
with this recurring sound:
my meyou meyou cat ...
sleeping in silence;
awakening in a Dream?

my meyou meyou cat ...
spinning silk
from yearning yarn;
sleeing on a bed
of illusions?

shush!  do not wake
my meyou meyou kitty:
milky dreams are better
creamed within slumber ...

myra

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Written February 25th, 2002

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    March 25

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    This is so beautifully written, just love your kitty poem. Beautiful flow of words and detail to. It was a pleasure to read.


  • Rovingone gold member
    January 17

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    Tender and sweet. Just the sort of poem that lets you feel the warm little kitten, asleep on the bed beside you, the pur and the pleasure of the kitty love.

  • Francis Vincent
    December 15, 2008

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    get outta here

    "milky dreams are better
    creamed within slumber ......"
    what a great line
    did you go to cat college?
    and
    i love the title
    "meyou cat"
    is that a play on "meow"
    but
    you broaden the relationship so incredibly
    "me" + "you"
    i am just going to give a casual observation here
    not pry into your personal business
    or
    ask you questions about your friends and then document the answers, etc
    lol
    but
    but
    but
    but
    i bet your pets / cats love you as mmuch as you love them



  • jennylynn
    July 16, 2007
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    Very cute poem. I love kitties!


  • Candy6
    June 7, 2007
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    cute

    when cat's whisker twitches it means s/he is dreaming.


  • B2oH
    February 12, 2004
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    How clever! I've often wondered what cats dream of when they lie there, twitching and making small mewling noises. Squirrels trapped within their claws? Mice captured by tails? Or perhaps a wee bird is within their grasp...or maybe none of these at all.

    This is cute and the final stanza is beautiful.

  • shootingstar
    December 2, 2002
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    neutral

    how cute! not usually a cat person, but maybe kitties are ok... lol
    *~shootingstar~*


  • March 3, 2002
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    :o)


  • scatcatblu gold member
    March 2, 2002
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    'milky dreams' 'creamed within slumber' - can I have a saucer - this is so cute - shhh don't wake myra - my cat does not meow - she trills - but she is totally weird and unusual - I think she is a dragon in disguise :)


  • myrataal silver member
    February 25, 2002
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    thanks gecko; kittymeow ... smiles ... did you smell the cream?

  • kittymeow
    February 25, 2002
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    very cool


  • gecko
    February 25, 2002
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    oh

    nice

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