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The Lier

I know your weakness

You lure them in with your innocent little lies
And just as quickly you stifle their cries
You control the situation with nothing less than an iron hand
While making empty promises that we may see the promised land
You lead us into battle with nothing but the clothes that are on our back
At this point you start praying that we never get to come back

I was just another pawn, a piece that got in your way
Because you are the queen of the battle and you believe you are hear to stay

The revolution has started, with this pawn taking the lead
I won't be fooled by another hypocrite controlled by power and greed

I know your weakness

You don't know what love is, to you it's just a game
The guys you seem to fall for, we are all just the same
Troubled boys from difficult homes, you try to reform the world
But as we change you slowly get bored as your plan begins to unfurl

I know your weakness

Your weakness is us...

Author notes

This should be the last of the poems about Rachael. It's been around 6 months now and I'm finally and completely getting over her.

Thank you for reading...

Hmm...Thoughts...

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    August 15, 2008

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    ooh this definitely a thought inspiring poem
    and i adored reading it, it really made me think of all the times ive been fooled and played, all my love
    kitty xxx