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Buoyant Symphonies

The moon rest in infinities waters
wrinkles of time reflecting in waves
from seas of gossamer green
to deep amethyst nimbus shadows
Life glows within this shifting orb
a crystal brilliance radiating inspiration
Its luminescent palm conducts an orchestra of stars
ever present are the lyrics of its soul

Author notes

Visual Stimulation: http://www.dailygalaxy.com/my_weblog/2007/08/does-a-full-moo.html

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  • Jasmine Rayne
    August 27, 2008

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    Such a beautiful write to go with a beautiful picture.

    "wrinkles of time reflecting in waves
    from seas of gossamer green
    to deep amethyst nimbus shadows"

    I feel like I can touch the colours the way you describe them here. :]

    "a crystal brilliance radiating inspiration
    Its luminescent palm conducts an orchestra of stars
    ever present are the lyrics of its soul"

    I love the musical twist you put on the picture. I can hear nature's orchestra loud and clear. I've read over and over these lines and they are more beautiful with every read. A wonderful write.







    -Lily♥


  • JinSays gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    a crystal brilliance radiating inspiration
    Its luminescent palm conducts an orchestra of stars

    Wow. Need I say more?
    This was bloomin brilliant. Soft and sweet, and somehow comforting. Make sense?
    Thank you for entering, and best wishes to you,
    jin


  • AlmostLover
    August 15, 2008
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    what wonderful imagery! great write ♥