We gathered for the big parade
As the Salvation Army band played
We were gathered along the way
The music flowed like lemonade
And dreams blew around like ticker tape
Looking for a way to escape
And we hummed a marching tune
Seven deep there was not much room
We waived flags in the summer breeze
Someone lit up and the children sneezed
As the old salt spoke and everyone around him listened
He said the worst storm was back in forty-five
The world was struggling to survive
With Harry S. Truman spouting the buck stops here
And we listened closely, no one daring to breathe
As sargeant's band continued to play a marching reprieve
Now with the evening came the storm
We watched the rain gather and start to fall
As the old salt rustled up his dreams
His eyes misty from forgotten memories
You could see them dancing in his thoughts
And among the battles that he once fought...
And we hummed a marching tune
Seven deep there was not much room
We danced on to that marching band
Such as were the hopes and dreams of the ordinary man...
Author notes
42.Life is but a dream within a dream--Edgar Allen Poe
A contest entry
- the good ..the bad..and the ugly.... by redhanded.
800 points, ended August 22, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry, Poetry and PreWrites! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended September 13, 2008, 340 entries
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Comments
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I like this....the flow is great as well as the images placed in my head as well...good write here my friend---best of luck to you in the future and with your writing---
andi
(redhanded)

