Right now I’m thoroughly pissed
Don’t like my poetry don’t have to dis
Nothing personal should ever be said
About the author whose poem has been read
I think of myself as quite mature
But there is one thing I will not endure
Talk about my form talk about my rhyme
I draw the line when you talk about my behind
Take it personal I sure as hell do
Right at this moment I‘m starting to stew
You showed lack of manners and very little class
When you stooped to talking about someone’s ass
Those words I could have lived without
Showed your lack of humor and what you’re about
Walking around with that stick makes you up tight
Even so this was wrong just wasn’t right
Bitch you don’t know me, or you would see
The anger wrapped in who I USE to be
I would have come to your house and kicked your ass
But that’s not me now that time has passed
I have nothing more to say to you
Except you need to pay attention and get a clue
If you’re not happy with what someone writes
Keep moving on and get a life
Author notes
I don't usually write this way any more but as you can see I was very angry. Poof! its written, its gone.
A contest entry
- Anger (Mis)Management by breedluv.
1400 points, ended August 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is great I think we must have been talking about the same person LOL!!
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There is that possiblity. LOL In reading my humorous poem about a mother in-law being caught in the shower and the son in-law going blind. She had the nerve to suggest I look at my own behind that might be sagging with time. Maybe I just took it the wrong way but at the time I didn't think so. Keep standing up for yourself you do it well. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Oh, I love it. These words practically spit off the page. And I wholeheartedly agree with the idea of criticizing the poem and not the poet.Well done!
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Thank you so much for the kind words. Writing it out is always better than taking a car, ship, train or plane and knoocking on someones door. lol God bless,
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someone talked about your butt? lol that's crazy.
Perfect rhythym!
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Sure Enough! lol I wasn't laughing at the time and decided to write it out instead of confrontation. Just chalked it up as her problem not mine.
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