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loss

"let me go.....please let me be"
darkness loving embrace tightens
taken away its essences and soul
it roars with they injustices

cut down for sins unanswerable
innocence's slayed cruelty
punishment unduly caused
the wrath now felt scar deep

passion born from purity
snatched from loving arms
a cold still death vengeance's
payment made in ailed

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  • Angelflower
    August 22, 2008

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    this was a really interesting piece.. The flow seemed a little broken in some areas but the imagery was really good. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest.

    Angle