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Unfulfilled

i've stopped dreaming of the fairytale
and happy endings that follow
i've excepted fate for what it is
know the truth have stop pretending

we spoke of moments and how it be
the day we finally joint as one
as we said our vows and pledged our love
with promises of years together

the hardest part is letting go
when the words and feeling cease
some days i lay and float away
on a sea of bitter tears

how it hurts to look within your eyes
to have you hold me and say those words
know that all the plans we made
don't hold as much meaning for you

"i love you" words that come to easy
spill forward from your tongue
i'm unsure,confused to understand
just how it all went wrong

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credit:Bring_Back_Romance_by_kedralynn

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    Sad write but I have been there

    So often we are caught up in a hurtful world where nothing makes sense and we feel the spiraling fall of untruthes now spoken . You are a temple within yourself never feel you arent complete without another for the dependnce on another to ensure your happiness is never a promise for life .Find yourslf and make you happy and secure without anothers help and in doing so you shall never feel that castle crumble . It was a hard lesson I had to learn but once I found that in this life first I have to depend on me and then others are a gift of life not an assurance of happiness