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I Give You My Heart

I sit within myself

Granting love to those in need
I sit within my heart
Vast rhythms vibrate the inner workings of my soul
Each gift unconditional

Yesterday becomes the tomorrow of hope
Only if you could see
Utopia of love

May we all see life together
Young love becoming ancient

Harnessing wisdom
Each moment
Answers come
Reserved for you and the me
Thoughts become a unified prayer

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  • Patpowers silver member
    August 23, 2008

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    Thanks for giving this!

    Good luck in the contest Rev! Beautiful descriptive work that you put into this...you are the best!


  • waydownuponjoy
    August 19, 2008

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    Hooray ...

    and you have shared the simple truth in a clear and concise manner and I loved it! Love is simple and while many try to complicate its essence I appreciate your poem and felt a rhythm of remembrance that renewed my spirit. Good words! joy


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    ..I love it..you have touched the depth and the beauty of the prompt in your wonderful poetry..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..well done...