Hello, can't you hear me...?
Have I told you that you got somebody that loves you here?
The girl that you know has long gone.
The pain you gave to her just too much, and she can't keep it.
Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Her world has crashing down and now it's just her empty flesh.
Do you ever feel guilty?
If I smile and don't believe.
Soon I know I'll wake from this dream.
Don't try to fix her, she's already broken.
Her hollow smile now left and clarify that she loved you that much!
Hello, can't you see me...?
Have I told you that you were the first boy who cacth her wave?
The girl with an innocent soul, has to felt the bitter of broken heart.
The sorrow of the truth that she can't have your heart.
Has no one told you she's not breathing?
Her world has gone, since you walk away from her life and shatter her heart.
Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping.
And I realized that this is not a dream.
I'm still here, yeah I am the girl who always waiting you here...
Author notes
hello-evanesence
A contest entry
- the good ..the bad..and the ugly.... by redhanded.
800 points, ended August 22, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
how pathetic the life i had? pls a honest comment...and thank you...
Comments
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hmmm,,,,
I like this...it also uses some lines from the song 2 which makes it a very good write as well...keep up the good work and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future...
andi
(redhanded)

