I love you
but do you love me?
I feel like nothing,
a nobody!
Please realize
that I am here.
Here to be with you
do I make that clear?
You stand there
looking so cute
then,you look at me
and turn your head
Will you notice me?
or will I be a nobody
listen, I love you
but do you love me?
Author notes
OMG XoXoJacindaXoXo
A contest entry
- Love someone who doesn't love you back! by StarOfDreams23.
450 points, ended August 15, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it make sense? Do the rhymes go with the parts?
Comments
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i really like it!!!

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This was wonderful! Good luck in my contest!


