Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Broken Stone

For many years I have been as hard as stone.
Granite.

This life has slowly hammered away and broken me apart.

I have been chisled down to bits
Pounded into a fine powder.

I have been tried in the fire,

Stepped on by the feet of many,

Blown by the winds of fate.

I have mingled with the dirt until that which I once was..
Is, no more.

I now await the great and powerful rain and,
The wisdom of the master craftsman.

He will gather all that I have become....
Ashes, dirt and powder;
and in his skill,
Mold me into the image of his design with careful, loving hands.

I know I will return to the fire once more.....but...
Only one more.

After the refining fire,I know I will not crack nor will I shatter. I will be Strong .

I can withstand the coming heat, for when it is ended,
I will be raised up and I will once again be made whole.

I will be anointed with the oil of gladness and
My face will shine like the breaking of the dawn
of a new day.....And I will be blessed.

A golden crown will sit upon my head,
Fine clothing adorn my body.

I will stand once more unshakeable and true.

I will lift my countenance toward the heavens and
raise my arms. My heart will be alive.

For I am a queen who has been newly reborn
out of the rubble and clay of the earth.

I will be thankful for the new life I have been given
And never forget from whence I came!
Selah- Selah-


How does this poem make you feel? What was your general impression?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 11 of 11
  • Topnotchsy
    August 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Like this write a lot. Does not ignore the realities and make it seem like life is any different than it actually is, but it still offers hope and faith. Nice write, I like it a lot!!

    . Rewarded 4


  • attack110
    August 18, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Astonishing

    Thats very powerful. I found a sense enlightening about this write. My question is....

    Can it be done?

    . Rewarded 4


  • SpiritMother
    August 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Awesome

    "I will be anointed with the oil of gladness and
    My face will shine like the breaking of the dawn
    of a new day.....And I will be blessed"...

    What an uplifting and glorious write. Blessings to you and yours always.

    . Rewarded 4


    • firefly53633
      August 17, 2008
      Edit | Reply

      Blessing Go Back!

      Thank you for the wonderful comments and warm feelings. Much appreciated.

  • Charles Johnson silver member
    August 17, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    truly awesome


  • jake2610
    August 17, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Absolutely Phenominal

    A brilliant piece of writing. Incredibly raw.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    August 16, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I really love this poem of yours,
    it's filled with a lot of truth and
    imagery. Lovely work here my friend!




    Jeremy0826

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    August 16, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    The life is always unpredictable..sometimes like this ..and somtimes like ,yet inbetween this and that we are crying and enjoying its faces simultaneuously well said verse..

    . Rewarded 4


  • OurGoldenYears Page gold member
    August 15, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    wow

    very firm post here, the soft tone, then the way it was carried throughout, very well stated as you softly wrote... thank you for sharing good luck
    Linda

    . Rewarded 4


  • ChickenPie
    August 15, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    this poem is simply amazing
1 - 11 of 11