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sunset sutra

against the ground
like crumpled shells
we shed our skin of grime

the air propels
heavy seas -
bleached bones

quietly, man remains

Author notes

the title was based on one of my favourite poems - "sunflower sutra" by allen ginsberg. as was his line "we are not our skin of grime".

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  • zochit2me gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    This is well written and flows with ease
    Thank you for the entry and best of luck

    ♥Becky♥


  • She burns
    August 15, 2008
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    Waiting for our time to come!!!