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I'll Be Waiting for Thee (Ded. Kris)

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upon my skin her butterfly kisses lay
and beneath satins sheets she's on fire
gentle are the fingers that simply play
and we're entwined in passions desire.

lips of cherry are calling out tonight
and alongside my breast she will stay
sweetest tattoo came alive in the light
as my lips placed a design of foreplay

bodies maneuvered, she slid above me
her curves enticing, her body heated
my nipples hardened, my eyes misty
to this beauty my arousals defeated

her breathing heavy, she's now ready
her fingers trail ivory flesh, she cries
removing each tier of a lavender teddy
I got lost within those baby blue eyes

hands turned to velvet, as she caresses
bare skins the best, I want all of  her
sweet smile intoxicating, she undresses
mouth hungry now, she begins to stir

scent of passions released from her core
my body's accepted her sweet invitation
between moist petals, she longed for more
my tongue dove deep with anticipation

tender circles around her bud, she moans,
farther apart, her pink petals were spread
and my finger slid into a place well known
her body arched high, hands above her head

she was now ready, I slipped my tongue in
grinding her mound hard, her honey I taste
her body shook, at this gentle misbehaving
a hand to her breast, she released on my face

A kiss from Kris, tonight we found bliss
the first for the both, we laid it for all to see
A wish for Kris, I shall promise you this
beneath the moonlight, I'll be waiting for thee.

Author notes

A contest entry for:
Adult Semi - Quickie!!!
Adult Semi - Quickie!!!
by AngelWithDarkWings


This is a dedication piece for a lady who has lit up my life in a few weeks I have known her. It has been a pleasure to meet her, I had met her through another friend, whom I thank also. Kris honey, this is for you. Wherever you are know that deep in the woods of Texas, you have a lady who loves you dearly. I shall be here when you return.

I love you.

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  • MMMM... Sinfully delicious and absolutely tempting! You know the only complaint I have is ... This appetizer only makes me want more!! And now!! lol

    You're a doll --- hugs n kisses!


    KRIS


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    Wow....what can I say...

    It's just very sensual,sweet and loving...
    Wonderful to love someone like this...

    XXJeannette


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    this is a beautiful poem and dedication. its full of passion and your words are beautiful as many can see.
    one very lucky lady I do believe. very hot words written in love.

    Fantastic job with the prompt & the poem

    good luck

    kat


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    Loving and passionate and well formed, not exactly a surprise from a master poet!

    Great stuff


  • KayJay
    August 15, 2008

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    Nicely done with a gentle passion that sparkles in your words and images... Excellent write and a pretty darn good dedication
    K


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 15, 2008
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    WHOA!

    STEAMY HOT! and loving in a delicate way, very nice my friend!


  • Griswold
    August 15, 2008

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    Very smoothly sensual write sweetheart, a wonderful flow and story. Ok, now who the hell is Kris? Did you conquer another one??? TFF...Love you baby...Scott


  • DrkPoet silver member
    August 15, 2008

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    It's certainly time for a cold shower after that, wheee! Congrats to you on another wonderfully penned piece of erotic, you are certainly one of the mistress' of sensual and erotica here!!

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