adam and eve made love
before they ate of the Tree;
now they have sex.
i don't believe they regret this exchange,
the former act much too angelic
to endure the grass stains.
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haha! this is great! fantastic, fantastic!
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I like this. It shows an individual style. I appreciate that more than anything on this site... the ablility to remain one's self in the face of so many different... let's say "inspirations."
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adam and eve made love
before they ate of the Tree;
now they have sex.
I truly enjoyed this one...something so divine in its simple expression yet roared with the will of a wild wave washing in at high tide. It stirred and rolled and I was happy to be caught up in its pools.
Thank for this excellent little piece.
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This was just great and
put a smile on my lips.
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ahaha! too funny!!!!!
g'luck!
sailor ptolema
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LOL!
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hah this is what i get out of reading paradise lost...
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