Shining bright as an ethereal sunrise,
essences of you
breathes life into my soul
with every message of love
spoken effortlessly with passion
like a melody in harmony with my spirit.
Inner sanctum gone,
like a crescendo crashing
disillusioned like an ever dimming star
As the thunderstorms of turmoil rain heavily,
bringing tears of dismay
in shadows of doubt.
Silence becomes questionable where truth lays
cutting deep
bleeding crimson tears
in the darkest vestibules of life,
wondering if will ever find peace embraced again.
Author notes
PROMPT:
this quote as inspiration...
"when all we look for
is a kind word
and all we catch
is a stab to the heart..."
Grey Mouser
please credit quote in author notes
A contest entry
- Contest PIF/Quote Inspired by Grey Mouser.
1750 points, ended August 28, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderfully written, the flow was great and full of imagery. The first stanza set the stage for the following, where one is suffused in the impression of bliss to find that the quite slices deeper than the most hateful words. Nicely written and many thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
You have done a remarkable job here. I love your word choices and the emotional tug this creates on the heart. Good luck in the contest!
♥ Touchof1der -
Very good dear this was beautiful and i like to think it was a glimpse within you soul
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Well done, my friend. A lot truth lies within these lines. The silence does cut deeply! Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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