Peace within thyself
White soul
Black nature
Mix to be
Eternal serenity
*~ardeo ardere arsi~*
Author notes
ardeo ardere arsi - To love, to glow, like fire.
A contest entry
- 15/15/15 Come see! :D by Lily Skie.
1900 points, ended August 25, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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What an interesting take on the prompt! Such a lovely and intriguing write. :]
"Peace within thyself"
You caught me here. I love this opening line. It's very tranquil and sets the tone for the rest of the poem. Wonderful. ^_^
"White soul
Black nature
Mix to be
Eternal serenity"
I love the abstract form in which you've written this piece. The small description is all the reader needs to paint a lovely picture in their mind. I also love your final words:
"ardeo ardere arsi"
I don't think I've ever heard such beautiful words before... Such a wonderful meaning as well. I'm glad you put it in your AN. :] Lovely take on your prompt. Absolutely adored your poem.
-Lily♥ -
Here is your prompt- sorry for the awful delay. Sleeping and all that haha- you may ask for another if this one displeases you:
http://citronrouge.deviantart.com/art/Flowers-45887037
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