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It's not the women's beach volleyball.
It is the whole ambiance.
It is
the swimmers,
the gymnasts.
It is not the women's beach volleyball.
It is the technical precision,
the marching color of China,
the bright colors of dung.
It is the basketball,
the water polo and the LED ceremony.
It's not the women's beach volleyball.
No, really.
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Author notes
Kathleen you write like Picasso, y'know...
I mean if Picasso wrote like he painted..
A contest entry
- My Auntie K! by Allyce May.
1700 points, ended September 18, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol - clever
Are you SURE it's not the women's beach volleyball?
This put such a smile on my face, I'm sure would make Kathleen smile too
Thanks for sharing this.
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Thank you Allyce. Always glad when I hear I added a smile to this world.
Paul
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I did not notice the women's beach volley ball...
...well, only a little bit of it!
Great poem, love the main essence and appreciate the humour. Also enjoyed the Olympics.
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ha! you are such a man I love this. Lane
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hehe!
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OF course it is....
too too good my friend and PERFECT.
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hehe. Yup. Thank you Pam.
Paul
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Humm..the thoughtfulness and its orginality is the strength of this wonderful piece my friend..I love it..and thanks for sharing it...
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Thank you PrabhuDayal.
God bless..
Paul
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Boffo! Boffo!
This was going to be written, had to be written, glad you did, sorry I didn't.
we must never let it become the women's beach volleyball
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Thank you for reading this Tom. Difficult to write with the Olympics looming in the background. I enjoy watching them so much.
Paul
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