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music haiku

music by the bay
at the foot of a mountain
we dance

Darlene Sperber
August 14, 2008

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  • Ahkam silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    very sweet

    very nice thought,
    under the pale moonlight,
    music by the bay
    at the foot of a mountain
    we dance till dawn.

    very sweet haiku


  • catz Moderators member
    August 31, 2008

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    This is one of my favorite haiku by you (hey that rhymes)
    Ypu've painted a beautiful picture of a wonderful evening.

    Good luck in the contest
    Love and
    Dee


  • jenelda silver member
    August 29, 2008
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    That sounds wonderful Darlene.


  • Mari Goes gold member
    August 20, 2008

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    Where there is foot and music, there must be dance
    Lovely sight


  • MargaretG
    August 19, 2008
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    This made me smile, nice thoughts of good times.


  • poetryality silver member
    August 18, 2008

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    I like! Love to dance, mountains, music, even feet...LOL Great work. Good luck to you in the challenge.




    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Terry-too silver member
    August 17, 2008
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    Lovely!

    Must be a special time!

    • J aime Coudre silver member
      August 18, 2008
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      Thanks for reading it...yes it was a very special time all summer...I miss it now we don't live there any more...


  • Hinemoa silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    That must have been very beautiful to see and hear Darlene, no wonder you miss it.
    Great haiku.
    Hine


  • Maureen silver member
    August 17, 2008

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    Sounds wonderful! Love your haiku!



    <3 Maureen


  • hugh wyles silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    Dear Darlene,

    If music be the food of love, play on!
    Was it a rhumbaku, a sambaku or a twistyku?
    I like the dreamy image.
    Good luck in contest.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)

    • J aime Coudre silver member
      August 18, 2008

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      Thank you Hugh, some times it was classiku, or afriku, countryku...different each Thursday night...always wonderku


  • angelica silver member
    August 15, 2008

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    I love dancing and I love music and performed at the foot of a mountain..perfect. Lovely haiku you have written.
    Love Joan


    • J aime Coudre silver member
      August 15, 2008
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      It was a wonderful place to be...I miss being there but visit in my dreams..

    • J aime Coudre silver member
      August 15, 2008
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      Took place in Bellingham, Washington by the bay at the foot of Mt. Baker every Thursday evening at 6:00p.m. through out the summer months...I now live in Florida...Do you think I miss Washington...immensely! My heart longs to be there...

  • Yemassee gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    Wonderful scene...music, mountains, dancing...I see colors...and the mountain is a wonderful backdrop.

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