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Felled




Somewhere inside these words
a breath of yesterday broke
gently upon my cheek.

When I didn’t want to hear,
I looked away and one more
time fell into your eyes.

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  • Nangaleema
    October 26

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    delicate, tender. "Somewhere inside these words" - your words work well with the image. great read. - NANGALEEMA


  • azlyn gold member
    October 11
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    Haven't read you in ages...well worth my time. Brilliant!

    Az


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 15

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    "a breath of yesterday broke
    gently upon my cheek."

    Beautiful, my Friend...as always.


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 14

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    this is a gorgeous moment, I love your voice so much...thanks for writing again..I've missed your poetry so much!


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 14

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    The picture and words compliment each other so very well. This is lovely poetry, Scott - a gentle nostalgia here, something very soft. Good to see you writing again.

    ~ Nicolette

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