If I asked you about
your gentle touch,
would you talk about
when you last touched
me,
If I touched your
soft lips tonight,
would you remind me
of how we kissed
when we said
good-bye.
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delicate, sensual longing. neat read. - NANGALEEMA


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Soft & lovely, Scribe...with a hint of sorrow.


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this has your signature tone...a beautiful melancholy that I have grown to love about your sensuality & poems


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they very first part made me sigh. I wonder the same thing sometimes.... the ending took a turn I wasn't expecting as I thought you may go into more about being together and not about being separated. kinda sad, but very sweet.







