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Then

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If I asked you about
your gentle touch,
would you talk about
when you last touched
me,

If I touched your
soft lips tonight,
would you remind me
of how we kissed
when we said
good-bye.

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  • Nangaleema
    October 3, 2008
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    delicate, sensual longing. neat read. - NANGALEEMA


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 15, 2008
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    Soft & lovely, Scribe...with a hint of sorrow.


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 14, 2008

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    this has your signature tone...a beautiful melancholy that I have grown to love about your sensuality & poems


  • Solidified
    August 14, 2008

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    they very first part made me sigh. I wonder the same thing sometimes.... the ending took a turn I wasn't expecting as I thought you may go into more about being together and not about being separated. kinda sad, but very sweet.