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Licking Flames




Repulsed!

Ugly rage transforms;
twists knots inside bitter
tundras within the confines
of my lurching stomach.

Veins pump fire!
I breathe fury and
untamed violence; fists
come down like every
bolt of lightning in inky
skies that ache with thunder.

I want to smell the
flaming oceans and
taste Death on your
deceitful tongue.

I am vehement in my intentions;
revenge lives in my soul-
saturated with hatred so
chaste it could hide in
crystal waters.

Push me to the cliff-side

and I will be avenged...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • breedluv gold member
    August 18, 2008

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    "I am vehement in my intentions"....nice phrase. The only suggestion I have is to involve your reader a little more by showing some aspect of the cause of your anger. Good write, and thanks for entering.