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Somewhere Between The Moon And You

Is there anything that I can do
To try to get a better view
Stuck somewhere between the moon and you
Trapped beneath the shades of blue
Unable to find a paler hue
To cover up what I've gotten into
Without the pouring rain to pursue
A love lost and long-overdue
Bound to lament the loss of you
And the thoughts of sorrow I never outgrew



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  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    September 1, 2008

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    This is really good! I liked it..something different to me..good luck in the contest! Thanks for entering it!


  • Crimson Poet
    August 16, 2008
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    Somewhere between kick ass and good

    Good write bro, good luck in the contest