So here we go a.g.a.i.n. love, another p/a/r/o/d/y/ for the show,
you b\r\e\a\k\ my heart.. way too s.l.o.w. ... com'mon baby let's not delay...
The show will not have a replay....
[ You may break it once
but don't you DARE break it twice ♥
The consecuences are helpless]
Baby all I wanted was to lie in y*o*u*r* arms,
kiss those lips and reclaim you mine...
all this time we were fine...
Baby, what went wrong?
Was I too strong?
Where you too young?
God...{ I hate you and love you so much}....
But baby one day I'll be so damn beautiful,
You'll regret letting me go.
&& then while you're sleeping I'll grab your throat
&& I'll take away the [venom] you've been cursed [with]
Once your heart begins to s/i/n/g/,
baby you'll be too late to come back to me....
oh baby, baby please don't c*h*o*k*e*...
You've been playing with the wrong joke...
Oh honey of all the lies you said
{I.L.O.V.E.Y.O.U. was the best }
I'll keep on bitting my t*o*n*g*u*e
until there's enough spilled blood
Maybe your sympathy will c/a/t/c/h ON
&& this way you'll eventually wake it UP...
Baby, baby please wake it up,
Because I h.a.t.e having to l/o/v/e you
and I love having to hate you....
Babe we'd make the p.e.r.f.e.c.t ImPeRfEcTiOn
If you'd be my heart's R.E.S.U.R.E.C.T.I.O.N.
So baby don't LET go...
I'm still holding on
Let's keep on the fight
&& put up with me tonight
Baby I'll enlighten your ♥ && mind
if you let our hearts become entwined...
Babe,
Will you be MINE??
~♥~
Author notes
Hope you catch the breath before the breath catches your tongue- XXVampireeyesXX
In a list
A contest entry
- The Dirty Pretty Contest by SchizoChic.
425 points, ended September 29, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - i want to know wut dirty pretty is by exithere.
600 points, ended December 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
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Oh honey of all the lies you said
{I.L.O.V.E.Y.O.U. was the best }
ing thats like amazing i love it
Baby, baby please wake it up,
Because I h.a.t.e having to l/o/v/e you
and I love having to hate you....
and that one
omg the whole thing
its orgasmic i love it
thanks for enterin -
Beautifully written. My heart aches for you. Best of luck.
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this was...wow...almost how i feel. whoa...rarely has that happened lately.
Baby all I wanted was to lie in y*o*u*r* arms,
kiss those lips and reclaim you mine...
all this time we were fine...
Baby, what went wrong?
Was I too strong?
Where you too young?
God...{ I hate you and love you so much}....
But baby one day I'll be so damn beautiful,
You'll regret letting me go.
&& then while you're sleeping I'll grab your throat
&& I'll take away the [venom] you've been cursed [with]
Once your heart begins to s/i/n/g/,
baby you'll be too late to come back to me....
these lines mainly...even though i know i just copy and pasted half your poem...captured my heart more than anything.
beautiful write luff. very very beautiful
Dani♥
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ooh this is pretty and painful
hehe only because dirty pretty hurts my eyes
hehe but this is alright apart from my personal preference i love it
all my love
kit kat
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wow this is great.. u have some great talent!
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Astounded. This is beautiful! I have attempted dirty pretty, but I'm afraid i'm too much of a coward to really put what I feel out there in bolds and commas... This is for the brave. You are brave to make an emphasis of your heart on here. I admire you for this. So very much.
The write itself says so much. Very well expressed, great rhyming, graceful and strong. Also sweet and pleading; but you recognize his faults. And let me tell you something, you are beautiful, and let no asshole tell you otherwise..because sooner or later he will realize his mistake. Love you sis!!!!!!!!!
Fresa Salvaje
And dude I know, i've been leaving really long comments on everyone..lol.
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Wow, this was amazing dirty pretty. You did such a beautiful job, I absolutely loved this!!!
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I never get Dirty Pretty. I have never understood it. Because I know what is going on with you, I get this. Maybe I will understand Dirty Pretty more better.
You know I hope things work out for you.
Great job.
Mike
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love it!
xoxo- christina
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