brilliant diamonds bracing skies
entranced by earth's silvery moon
falling stars race; comets in space
celestial whispers chanting tunes
there's emotions in both our eyes
recognizing passions sweet alibi
ethereal moments we contemplate
hearts soaring as miracles grow
nestled so proud; heavenly clouds
tiny sparkling gems orbit aglow
souls falling into quested embrace
lost forevermore in love's grace
Author notes
art credit: http://www.dailygalaxy.com/my_weblog/2007/08/does-a-full-moo.html
A contest entry
- It Must Be The Moon part II . by JinSays.
600 points, ended August 16, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very beautiful word usage, it painted a great picture in my mind. It seems really well written as far as flow, some of the verbiage and images just took my breath away.
Very sweet and refreshing!
. Rewarded 4
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Beautiful! It is very light in a way. It made me feel relaxed and happy. There are some beautiful word combinations in this piece. The imagery is breathtaking! Great job with this! I'm so happy I got to read it.
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souls falling into quested embrace
lost forevermore in love's grace
Niiiiice!
this is one of the best poems I've rad all day, it's absolutely beautiful!
Thank you, and best wishes,
jin
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As jcat said below, I am speechless!
This poem was one of the most gorgeous poems I have ever read. You beautifully described the picture, and the poem seemed to just flow easily and fabulously.
My favorite line of all was:
"celestial whispers chanting tunes"
yet I also liked the final two lines:
"souls falling into quested embrace
lost forevermore in love's grace"
Great job, and best of luck in the contest! -
I am speechless....this is sooooooo beautiful!!! Oh wow!!!! You out did yourself here.....Best wishes but so NOT needed!!!! Lovely....lovely......lovely!
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Beautiful interpretation of the pic, equating the moon with feelings of love. I suppose it will always be so for the moon, for most lovers meet in the night; a full moon being a plus, helping to set the tone.
Rave on poet, rave on---
I love you,
Brazos
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