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Stroked the Night Fall

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Mystery unravels its glow upon us,
as the moon dances with the distant sea.
Sparkle of light gathers around what was
and embraces the souls of so many.

Upon the ripples of the sea it moves
soft music plays from the kiss of the moon.
Love slowly rides within the evenings groove,
and the waves of passion arrives real soon.

Within moments our dreams are played out,
and mystery no longer exists out here.
For beneath the moonlight, sands move about,
we blend perfectly, beneath the moonlights ear.

For tonight the moon and skies heard all,
passionate pleasures, that stroked the night fall.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    Sweet and tender, yet subtly passionate. Wonderful writing. And my beautiful moon


  • JinSays gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    For beneath the moonlight, sands move about,
    we blend perfectly, beneath the moonlights ear.

    this is very nice, sensual, sweet. I thank you for such a gorgeous piece,
    jin


  • Griswold
    August 15, 2008

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    Beautifully done honey, but it just loses something from when you read it to me. Oh, i know what it is, hearing your voice. Love you baby...Scott


  • Volfeng
    August 14, 2008

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    MMMmmm wow very nice, Indeed, and the pic is awesome too!! I love you!!