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I am awakened to this Day

I am awakened to this day
wearing my soft satin-smooth
silk-woven Dream

this Dream I wear

spun from the unreachable skies
scaly trees
soft leaves
murmers of water
and laughter of sun

this Dream I wear

woven by senseless
bashful worms
into fragile thread
into musical light
playing my wants

this Dream I wear

stroking my soul
this tender kisses
of prolonged awareness
tracing the lines
of flesh I wear

look!
everything it caresses
turns to gold

until I am shining like a sun

myra

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Written February 25th, 2002

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  • February 26, 2002
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    so bright .. sparkles like gold ..


  • myrataal silver member
    February 26, 2002
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    Thank you Mike ... I read and learn from you ...

  • Robbo
    February 26, 2002
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    a great great read, i wish i could write like this.

  • Michael Dennis Rivers
    February 26, 2002
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    So positive, beautiful and happy... would that half the people here read and learn from you Myra. Again, thanks.
    Mike


  • myrataal silver member
    February 25, 2002
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    Thank you nell and gecko ... I love to do some silky things sometimes ...


  • gecko
    February 25, 2002
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    sigh


    they is clever lil cattipillars they is
    thankyou for this one Myra
    soft


  • nell
    February 25, 2002
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    oh this is very nice
    i enjoyed

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