seeking
I looked for one
to love, a friend for life
that is when I found my soul mate
she walked into my life, a dream come true
together, we laugh, love and live
we meet each others needs
I'm no longer
seeking
A contest entry
- Rictameter Word Bank by piccola.
900 points, ended August 17, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful!
This is perfection to me!
I think it so great that you can keep a theme, rhyme, & do so in a metered form to give shape! 
I have to look into this! I see this came about with use of a word bank! I do think you'd have made scads of $$$ in advertising & wonder what made you change your mind...oh...
...it's because you're too intelligent to go through all the nastiness & competition of the industry! 
Good going my friend. Glad you won a trophy! 
As always thoroughly enjoyed this read of yours! 
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Hood-Wink!
A rictameter that flows perfectly, and you've penned some precious lines that gently drift over the reader, bringing a sense of warmth and love...A good rictameter with excellent shape, and the syllable count is spot on...
You have been Hood-Winked
Much love ~Lilac
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great rict. Sovely shape it takes. thank you
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I really like the way that you have used this form
the presentation is beautiful - and the sentiment is lovely - my favorite part was the repitition at the end good luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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Wonderful
I wish I was you no longer seeking. I miss my mate very much. I know what it like to feel that away and it gone. My brother past away and my friend is very ill. I wish I could go back to the happy times and relive them. I guess I did by the words you wrote. Today been especially stressful. I have been praying and praying. I think I am losing my mind. I lost my glasses and a checkbook and a watch.Sorry about venting the stress must be getting to me. Thank you for helping to remember times were not always this bad. Thank you for your kind words. I still feel even in hard times someone elesa is having a harder time them me. I need to be thankful for what I can give to others. It may not be much it all that I have.
Thank you
Brenda
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