Hiding Behind Broken Fences (Rictameter Chain)

Hiding

in the shadow

seeking comfort, loving.

We shatter beneath life's branches.

Echoes fade within the depths of memory

as wild laughing becomes weeping.

Your conscience keeping you

safely kept in

hiding.

Fences

broken, mended

like hearts impossible

from keeping safe, completely whole.

Sweet breezes of passion hand delivered

assists in trying to bring light,

the sweet mirror effect,

love & light mends

fences.

Author notes

A contest entry for:
Rictameter Word Bank
I love reading rictameters so I'm having a contest. If you don't know how to write a rict, here is a link that is fairly easy to understand.

Rictameter is a form usually centered aligned.

syllable count
2
4
6
8
10
8
6
4
2

First word and the last word are both the same.

A contest entry

Rictameter Word Bank by piccola. 900 points, ended August 17, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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Griswold
August 17, 2008

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~looking at poem~ Hmmmmmm... an HM... ~looking at my poem~ Hmmmmmm.. GOLD!!!!! Neener! neener! TFF I'm in shock. Love you baby...
piccola
August 17, 2008
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beautiful ... great form and shape. (not a personal comment
Griswold
August 15, 2008
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Very nicely written and presented sweetheart. I may as well not even try Love you baby...Scott
Volfeng
August 14, 2008

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Beautiful Forms, beautiful words, beautiful Poetess, I love you, Tory
Haiku-bless-you
August 14, 2008

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This is a lovely collection of thoughts, creative and meaningful in this rictameter chain. You go girl!

Dennis