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d_r_e_a_m_s

dreams,
are like fireflies

(they flicker a lot)

but they're so pretty
when they're all lit up

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  • transit
    August 16

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    aaww

    This is such a beautiful poem in its essence and it held so much truth. Thank you for putting the smile on my face again The title was very different and made it dream-like in itself. Keep writing yeah

    loveees,
    transit~


    • deep one
      August 16
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      thanks muchz! I'm glad you liked it! smiles-deep one

  • Beauty Of Silence
    August 16

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    omgosh! this is perfect! i love this piece so much! (i'm speechless, so i'll probably be repeating meself) I LOVE IT! you wrote this so well, the words you used is brilliant, this is genius! it was short, and your message got sent across perfectly fine! keep penning

    I LOVED IT!!!


    • deep one
      August 16
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      hey thanks so much! I appreciate your kind review! smiles.

  • BluRosePoet8488
    August 14

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    Bree,
    How very true your words are to me for they powerfully speak a truth. Thank you for sharing. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~

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