As I think of you at night,
when i'm cold
and all alone,
Just pretend you love me...
As I leave you messages
on your phone
because for me you didnt answer,
Just pretend you love me...
As I lay here naked
giving myself to you
completely,
Just pretend you love me...
And as I cry for you
because somebody hurt
you deeply,
Just pretend you love me...
As I sit here and
Genlty ; Lovingly
hear your every wound,
Just pretend you love me...
And as I sit here
dressed up and
waiting for you,
Just pretend you love me...
And when im at home,
washing your clothes - the thongs
of other girls you have fucked,
Just pretend you love me...
When I obiediently take your hits,
when you come home
drunk at night,
Just pretend you love me...
as I cry untill my eyes bleed
while you tell me that
I am worthless,
Just pretend you love me...
When your hands wrap around neck,
and hold my head
under water,
Just pretend you love me...
and when you realise that you have killed me,
and that you will never
see me again,
you tell me that you love me...
and when you stand above my grave,
and realise what
you lost,
you cry because you loved me...
...
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wow, words do not have an expression for how deep that is
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Wow,
I almost cried while reading this. It reminds me of how I felt with one of my ex's and a very close friend whom I was in love with. It was metaphorical death, more of a death to my heart and the love I felt for them, but I loved them and they said they loved me but nothing they did really showed it, so I feel your pain. Amazing write. Thank you for sharing. Things will get better.
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I liked this although gently is misspelled. edit it and I think it is perfect.
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The background is really perfect for this poem, it sets a mood. The writing is good and flows very well. Good job.
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deeply moving. every line struck home and delivered a powerful hit of emotion. maybe it's because i can relate to it in a way, or maybe it's because this poem is just that nicely written. i'm going to say it's both. i love the last few lines. great job.
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Thank You
Thank you guys for the comments
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It is wrote very well
I think it sounds that when you wrote this poem you were in a real hard time of your life, you felt as you were unwanted and everybody petended you weren`t there, to me this is very sad... And if you still feel as this poem states then you need someone like me to lift your spirits... My name is john and you can reach me at johnjr0@hotmail.com -
wonderful
This is absolutely amazing. i love the way your worte it. its mean alot.
tahnkyou for the beautiful written poem. it made me feel what you were writting.
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