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My Angel, My Choice

I can't hear
my angel's voice.
I feel the fear
but I've made my choice.

He's the one that
I want to live for,
the one I would die for,
the one I would kill for.

My worry pierces me
like a dagger through the heart
as I worry but act care-free.
I feel like I'm being ripped apart.

I need my angel's voice.
I need to get that call.
I no longer have a choice,
without him I would fall.

Author notes

I'm really missing him right now so that's probably where all this is coming from.

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  • I love this! It's so sad! It just what I needed! Thanks! I needed a good cry! It reminds me of me.

    • Yo-Yo
      August 15
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      thank you

      guy troubles? im guessing if u wanna talk about it u can message me

  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 14

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    awwww this is sad, but a very powerful write, wonderful job glad you got to hear his voice
    *Hugs*, take care and keep writting
    Stephanie ♥

  • Lexie
    August 14

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    awww, so sweet. very nice description and use of words in this poem.

    My worry pierces me
    like a dagger through the heart
    as I worry but act care-free.
    I feel like I'm being ripped apart.

    wonderful!

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