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Chocolatiers Rose

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Dedicated to all partial to chocolate!

 

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Rose of chocolate exquisite and sweet,
Such is the beautiful chocolatiers treat...

An endorphin boosting dreamy temptation,
This silky smooth milky, is a sensation..

Flowing down like melted heaven inside,
Is the chocolatiers rose on an internal ride..

Slipping down a yummie treat,
Chocolate is the favoured eat!

An aphrodisiac chocolate definately is,
For sensual lovers it is the biz!

For children it is a sheer delight,
A reward for being well behaved, right?!

A treat that children will always pine for,
A need that dieters will always want for sure..

The Cadbury brothers of Bournville,
Compete for notoriety with the Swiss to fill..

Fill the place for chocolate at its best,
Lindt and Walkers also compete in the chocolate test..

To make something that is rich and creamy,
The all time desirable chocolate dreamy!

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Copyright: Kazytc
August 2008

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Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2417773
Contest Quickie.......Chocolate Dreams by Slayer
This is for all chocolate lovers and chocoholics.
I adore chocolate. It is my favourite comfort food.
I admit my addiction and I never want rehabilitation.
Speak to me, all you chocoholics!
Tell me about your delight in this awesome nibble.
The pic is the prompt
RULES
Just the usuals....
Credit the pic prompt in your
Please use spell check
No epics....30 lines max
If you reserve, please complete it before the closing date
which will be on August 17.
Enter this contest
* This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will
be able to see your name.
* Closes in 2 days, or after 4 more entries
* Rewards - Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
* Prewritten poems are not allowed.
* Enter a new poem

Picture depicts: A rose made from chocolate!

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Comments

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  • Gwenevere
    October 18

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    Now you've done it.Just as my waistline was reducing you go and tempt me.Just one little piece won't hurt will it


  • MysticalRayne gold member
    October 8

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    ahhhhhhh my ultimate downfall lol chocolate - for this wonderful treat I am guilty of this pleasurable sin mmmmmmm - lol now I want some.. Your rhyme in this piece flows smoothly and I love the tale you have woven... Congrats on your shines


    • Kazytc gold member
      October 8
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      Awww Thanks Millions Samantha!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Yes its my downfall too, I simply cannot resist it!
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

  • Kazytc gold member
    September 27
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    Thanks millions!

    Thanks millions and millions for kindly awarding me a bronze for my poem in your wonderful contest which I enjoyed immensely, and thanks for the wonderful and kind review of my poem too you are so kind.
    Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
    Good luck in all of your contests hope you win Gold in them all!
    Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc XX

  • Swan song gold member
    September 26
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    sorry rules state only one gold winning poem but this is was delectible poem

  • Magikal Fairy Girl silver member
    September 25

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    yummmmmmm...yummmmmmmmmmm!!!
    Chocolate!!!!!! yumm
    Great poem..
    Best wishes in the contest!!


    Magikal Fairy Poet


    • Kazytc gold member
      September 25
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      Glad the chocolate appealed to you!

      Thanks millions for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it. It is a great honour to enter your
      wonderful contest thanks for the honour and the privalege.
      Hope you win gold in all your contests you well deserve to your work is excellent. Best of luck to you too! Hope you find a lovely new name you like real soon!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX


  • daviscth silver member
    September 8

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    OMG!!! I can see why this won gold. I can almost take the chocolate now...... Thanks so much for your entry.

    • Kazytc gold member
      September 8
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      Awww thanks Millions!

      Hi there!
      Thanks millions for your really lovely review of my poem you are so kind and I am so glad you enjoyed my entry and the savour of rich melting chocolate dripping from the Chocolatiers Rose!
      You are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks
      for the privalege and experience.
      I would be honoured if you would consider entering my new
      and special contest which is up at:

      http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2420189

      The Judge of my contest is the famous artist who painted
      the 23 pictures offered in the contest as poets muses.
      Chances are the poems will be given out with each painting when it is sold and the artists paints the spiritual essences of famous film and movie stars and famous singers too. So lots of fun and huge points for the winners. Worth a pot shot I think! Your work is excellent.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

  • Riamh
    August 17

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    Congratulations on the Gold, Kaz. Very well done. This one was my favourite right from the start. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for entering it in my contest. A beautifully happy piece of poetry that I am glad you shared with us.
    Slayer

  • grandniem gold member
    August 15

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    YUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Wow, Kaz.///this makes me salivate for that perfect confection of chocolate treats!!! ANY kind,..not fussy here!!! Has to be milk chocolate though!!!! What a great poem!! The delicious visuals were a temptation of the taste buds!! (M-m-m-m-m-m) GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND! HUGS,...Grace


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    August 15

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    Oh! sis! I love chocolate!! just talking about it makes my mouth water!!!lol. you did a wonderful job!!! best of luck in the contest!!

    Angel

  • Riamh
    August 14
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    Now that is an appreciation of chocolate!


    • Kazytc gold member
      August 14
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      Thanks Millions!

      Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Its a great honour to enter your wonderful contest thanks for the privalege and experience.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX
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