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Sea of Tears To Nowhere

Looking into nightfalls
   chocolate marbled sky
      there below horizons
romantic waterline sea,
   rest not full moon
      but a hole in the sky;
where spills oceans
   deep briny blue
      nature's crying tears
from her eye of the moon
   on the other side
      of nowhere.

 

 

 

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Credit Artist:
and thanks once again to my friend, who allowed me to twist her arm enough for this picture...
http://www.dailygalaxy.com/my_weblog/2007/08/does-a-full-moo.html

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  • Wind 03
    August 18, 2008
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    wooow

    well written..wonderful! speechlesss i am

    juliet


  • Blue Rew silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    Overflowing with emotion
    and deeper connections to nature
    and the strifes she suffers.
    Congrats on the shiny cup!
    It is a read that offers immersion. Blue


  • Gwenevere
    August 16, 2008
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    Very well done on capturing Gold with your captivating poem, Ros


  • dustookie2
    August 16, 2008

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    Like the feeling of this one being the 'other side of nowhere' Penned with your reflection shining. CONGRATULATIONS on the Gold


  • JinSays gold member
    August 15, 2008

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    rest not full moon
    but a hole in the sky;
    where spills oceans
    deep briny blue
    nature's crying tears
    from her eye of the moon
    on the other side
    of nowhere.

    WOW!!!!
    this is fantastic,thank you so much for this gorgeous poem...
    best wishes, and blessings always!
    jin

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