WINTER WOES – Non Entry
2/4/2 Nr. 1
black clouds
murky grey skies
white snow
2/4/2 Nr. 2
wind howls
garage door flaps
door slams
3/5/3 Nr. 3
rain cascades
river overflows
drowned gardens
hu-san. 15/08/08.
Author notes
This contest is to honour a promise made upon the return of my lost daughters, MariGoes and Gaze to Hugh Wyles Favourites Group.
haiku haka
haeri mai
hari kite koe ra
aroha nui
“welcome!
pleased to see you
much love.”
In a list
A contest entry
- FOR MEMBERS of HUGH WYLES FAVOURITES GROUP ONLY by hugh wyles.
1750 points, ended September 4, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Dear Hugh,
Excellent haiku (all of them)! I'm glad I don't have to judge this contest..there are a lot of excellent 'ku's! (You might have to resort to putting names with haiku listed in a hat and pick the winners that way.) j/k
This was a fun contest (even though the first 'ku I wrote gave me a headache)! I'm glad you're a man of your word and kept the promise you made to MariGoes and Gaze!
Love and Hugs,
Maureen
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excellent~
Excellent haiku's da
I wanted to do one on winter but still so hot here in Ky its unreal 89 degrees....thought I would wait until chiller weather
This would be a winner if it weren't a non entry
Hugs
Your castle daughter
Molly aka Susan~~~
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Beautiful pictures, sounds, sensations...created with each haiku! KUDOS!
Always ♥
Renee
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Very nicely done, Hugh! You make it look easy!
Love and Hugs,
Maureen
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Brrr, the picture alone makes me feel cold!
You have Winter all over this page dad!
I like the windy one, I like the wind and the sound it makes
You have nice ones here, this contest is sooo much fun!
Loves back
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This sounds like my Florida weather minus the snow..Although I would not mind a little snow at this time...
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excellent~
These are excellent ku's da
Will try and see what I can come up with
Depends on how I am feeling
Hugs
Your castle daughter
Susan~~~
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