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~We Passed This Way~

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~We Passed This Way~
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Once upon a time,..we passed this way!
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Years ago,..the sun looked
much the same as it did today.
The evening sky was cast in light
blue with coral pink streaks and
white wispy clouds reflecting the
sun's distant rays. Children ran
about, playing in the yard,...
waiting for fireflies. Not a care
in the world did they have, nor did
it seem to matter. Life was abundantly
good and reveled in, almost succulently.
Familiar sounds of laughter and voices
planning the next day, seemed to go
on forever. Endless summer nights,
a mellow existence of those
who dwelled in the rapture of the
moment,...however fleeting it now
seems to have been.
As I look upon the horizon,
Seeing that same sky I did back
then, my mind drifts back to
that time when life was most
certainly good.
Gone are those days,
passing away as all things do.
Yet, I still see those children,
I still hear their laughter.
Then,
quietly,...alone, I bask in
the afterglow, knowing
as we walk this highway of life,
we build sweet memories.
For we
have passed this way!

Author notes

Option # 9
To realize the unimportance of time is the gate to wisdom

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  • Ti Amo Te Quiero
    October 6, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry, this was what i was looking for for option 9. Good luck


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 16, 2008
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    Those moments I remember and cherish, which make my heart ache to experience them again, and to fortunate enough to experience them a second time- that is good fortune.
    Life at its sweetest, to be reveled in.

    Congratulations on receiving the bronze trophy!

    Beautiful presentation here. BTW, I designed this background.


  • DawnBaby
    August 14, 2008

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    So Pretty

    Thank you so much for your truly beautiful contribution to the contest and good luck to you.


  • Kazytc silver member
    August 14, 2008

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    Breathtaking!

    Woweeee this one is just out of this world, such true words and ones I can sincerely relate to now that my daughter is 18 and all grown up already, seems only yesterday that she too played in the yard and danced like a little fairy in the sunset wow, this really hit in there deep, such a fabulous poem and so richly and well painted with such stunning poetic graphics and artistry. I am totally bowled over with this one, its so empathic and fabulous a read.
    Bravo! Well done just adore it, you are totally amazing.
    Another platinum Poet Laureate for you Grace! Truly phenomenal, poetry at its extreme best!
    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx


    • grandniem
      August 15, 2008
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      Thanks so much Kaz!!

      I am humbled by your words my friend! I write straight from the heart,...what I feel, so I guess the heart never lies! HUGS and blessings Grace

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