In your arms,
it feels so right.
In your arms,
where you hold me tight.
In your arms,
my dreams come true.
In your arms,
we're one, not two.
In your arms,
is where I'm meant to be.
In your arms,
is alright with me.
In your arms,
I love you, dear.
In your arms,
I'm always near.
In your arms,
I'll sleep all night.
In your arms,
you are my light.
In your arms,
our love just grows.
In your arms,
I love you so.
Author notes
I was thinking about Twilight. 
I think this is from Bella, but it could really be from anyone almost.
option 1
"Eternity exists only in a moment"
A contest entry
- Young Love by AnnaJayne.
600 points, ended October 21, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Secret Love by piccola.
650 points, ended October 22, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Endeavers of the Heart by J Kard.
650 points, ended December 9, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very relatible.
amazing job. -
Amazing. it had a great...unity to it. idk. but i loved it. you used the repetition perfectly, and i can see how it fits the prompt
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Aw...
It's sweet and cute. I like that. It's lovely. Good job Good luck
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EEEP! i can totally relate with this one! i love it when he holds me! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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AWESOME. Actually I do like the poem for its theme, but alas I hate the character [Bella *blech*] But it really is awesome though. ^_^
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the rhyme and flow are good but it doesn't show the secret love I am looking for.
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Awe, this is so sweet..
I like it too much..
Beautifully done.
good luck in the contest.
-Mandi
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This poem flows really nicely and it has a really good rhythm to it. Although it is a simple poem it really does put forward the most deepest feelings when it comes to being in love.
The poem sums up how it feels to be in love with that special person perfectly. You've done really well with putting these feelings into prospective, well done. Amazing write!
Good Luck in the contest!
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the reputition is nice and it is a beautiful poem, best of luck.
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This is the true meaning of true young love! Very good and the "in your arms" may be a bit repettitive but it works with the flow and the rhyming well done!
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What a beautiful creation! I love the tender emotion you invoke with your words. Thank you for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,
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wow!
a very gentle and beautiful write! keep penning!
~beauty of silence
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such a tender thought that makes me warm and fuzzy inside. great write
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i like it lots!!!
very good!
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