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Pressure

I want this all to be right.
don't want to feel this another night

cant take it anymore, I'm coming undone.

i might start crying in front of you

necessary to concentrait

cant sleep, just stay awake

 

i want to get through this

to me its to much pressure

and i break down and cry

 

 its to much pressure

dont bother finding me, i wont be here

i'll be to busy sleeping to escape my fear

 

this isnt helping at all

i just want to be held in your arms

but all this pressure holds me back

the room starts to spin

and out of nowhere

 

the pain and pressure slowly kicks in 

 

 

 

Author notes

i wrote this when i was upset cause i lost the one i loved and i felt like a wreck without him

this one of the ones i love, but what do you think?

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  • Clarky
    November 11
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    very touching