A long time ago in a galaxy far away...
There was a caveman and his friends looking for food,
So they went in the jungle they approached many different animals but one was special to them. So they continued and grabbed that animal, then they discovered fire, threw that animal on the flame and thus,(dramatic pause) the bacon/hero was born!
A thousand years later there was a king, his name was burger king.
Then they invented the baconater!
A contest entry
- Make Up Your Own Hero by Slick99.
450 points, ended August 17, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry Contest--For Children Up To Age 12 by kiwikrazi37.
450 points, ended August 25, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Could you understand the poem did it make sense?
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nice write
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lol! this so funny especially the first time you read it! This is great it totally made sence to me clearly AWESOME JOB!
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Funny, cute and inventive.
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Ha! Yes, it makes sense. I like the way you built this up. Nice narrative going on. You could start a whole series and a new fad could happen.
like:
"Rome Invents the Baconator"
"I Was A Teenage Baconater"
"Who Ya' Gonna Call?---Baconator"
" A Day in the Life of A Baconator"
"Baconator Sells Out On QVC"
Heheheh.
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Very funny. Polish the sentencing a little and it
will truly stand out!
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BTW-
I don't eat meat either, but it doesn't matter. Your expressing yourself and I respect that.
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hahahaha so funny, love how you bring in the baconator from BK.. that's genius.
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Hrmmm as a person who does not eat meat this poem does not appeal to me but I wish you much luck in the contest be well
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I was worried about that in some cases but I wrote it anyway.
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Hahahaha! This is really good! It made me laugh a lot. So I guess we can thank these cavemen :] Bacon sounds good right now... lol. Great poem...good luck!
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Yeah whats better than bacon
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lolololololololololololololololol !!!!! You're warped !
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Thanks this was my first poem
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Keep on writing there, Stevie Ray!
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what the?
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SOOOOOO funny! Everything goes better with bacon!
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ha ha ha
this was hilarious!!! ha ha ha! thanks for entering. good luck.
-slick99
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