Discovered only to lose control,
Familiar language but an empty scroll.
Designated smile to shield the pain,
Revealed umbrella when there is no rain.
Untouched romance that wastes to none,
Blank bullets for a loaded gun.
Unknown thoughts kept to myself,
Bankrupt in a fond heart's wealth.
Allusion,
Inclusion,
Confusion.
Author notes
Somethinglovely to venture towards something spoken, still 'unknown'.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie - Word Prompt by Page Deleted..
450 points, ended August 15, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Show me what you got.
Comments
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I like the contradictions within this piece, especially in the lines:
"Untouched romance that wastes to none,
Blank bullets for a loaded gun."
The rhyming seems a bit elementary, but the rhythm is strong, so it is still a great piece.
Thankyou for entering.
Keira
Forever--x -
i love the way you think
it must be your brain but i reallly think it's your smile
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