Massive lunar majesty
like luminescence through
shades of gray;
lighting paths across the
hypnotic sea in patterns
so tranquil the sky
bows down in honour...
Author notes
Credit Artist:
and thanks once again to my friend, who allowed me to twist her arm enough for this picture...
http://www.dailygalaxy.com/my_weblog/2007/08/does-a-full-moo.html
A contest entry
- It Must Be The Moon part II . by JinSays.
600 points, ended August 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love him ♥
Comments
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Gorgeous. . .every word, every stanza. I felt as if I were falling in love, that was a nice effect.
I'm so pleased this is in MY contest!
Thank you, best wishes,
Jin
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Great title, drew me right in...Very mellow...You capture the subtle yet irresistible pull of the moon, retaining the cool mystery of it. Thanks to your friend for the image, it suits the text beautifully. Best of luck in this contest. Peace, Rhonda
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