Your Palletes Empty,
So you wipe your tears upon the Canvas.
Hoping your sheer desperation screams through.
Too many years of Tarnished Dreams,
Leaves your head Rioting,
In a Schizophrenic Panic Attack.
You're smothered in Hints of a Borderline-Bi Polar,
WITH Suicidal Tendencies.
Passed experiences,
Have left you drowning in such ruinous sympathy.
Time is certainly not on your side.
You see your inspiration truly has died.
Considering of course medication,
Is where it lies.
Yet never more from this atrocity can you deride.
Oh, Bitter Sweet..
Insanity
Author notes
Penned with your insides
- A Hard Rock and Heavy Metal Lovers Gro group list • next in list
A contest entry
- prewrites by Ami.
550 points, ended July 12, 124 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Idk.
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Thank you.
<3 Glad you enjoyed, Lulz.
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Lovely
Hey Beautiful, I loved this poem. The way you swish around your words is Like a knife in butter, How do you do that lol. I really enjoyed it. 1 of my faves for sure!
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Thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I really appreciate your time and critique. <3
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this is lovely hun
i love the imagery in this piece here
its got such a hold on it and i love it
all my love,
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Hehe.
Awe, Thank you.
love ya
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Oh, and ps - I believe that was my first applause. ^_~ You earned it!
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YAY
-dances-
APPLAUSE.hahaha.
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It's wonderful!
I think this might be my favorite poem of yours so far, Ivory. It's absolutely gorgeous and so proud to call you my friend, bandmate, and inspiration. Remind me that I want to talk to you about this phone on AIM or something. I can't seem to find the right words right now.
Maybe I'm just sleepy. xD Regardless, I love this poem to death. You should show Mocha.
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I'm just greatful you understood it. I didn't know if people would or not. -nod nod-
I will remind you. Yessss..
=] Lol, I will eventually show her.
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Truly brilliant
I love this...it's amazing and creative. I love your artistic ability. X's and O's
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Thank you,love.
Hehe.
I draw inspiration from your amazingesssss
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I fucking loved this, end of. Brilliant and fucking beautiful.
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Thank You
=] I thought you'd take a liking.
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Never has such beauty emenated from such dark words on this site.
A triumph to contradiction, a great ode to reality in all its malign splendour!
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Thank you
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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